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IELTS Listening Part 3 · Hard

Getting feedback on an essay

A tutor gives a student feedback on an essay. Listen for strengths, weaknesses and advice.

Type the whole sentence

Sentence 1 of 90/9 completed

Tip: write numbers as digits (14th, 6.30, 95). Capitals and punctuation don't matter.

Full transcript (contains answers)
  1. Thanks for coming in, I wanted to talk to you about your essay.
  2. Overall, your argument was clear and well organised.
  3. Your introduction, however, was a little too long.
  4. You also relied too heavily on a single source.
  5. I'd suggest reading some more recent research on the topic.
  6. Some of your paragraphs didn't link very well to each other.
  7. Try to use more academic vocabulary, and avoid informal expressions.
  8. Your referencing was excellent, so well done on that.
  9. If you revise it, I'd be happy to look at it again next week.

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